Blue moonlight spilled in through the windows, lighting my way as I padded softly across the wood floor of the cottage. I held my skates by the laces, wincing each time they bumped together.
At the front door, I slipped my feet into my boots and lifted up on the door latch. A gust of wind blew inside, causing me to open the door much faster than I intended.
Creeeeeaak...
Eyes wide, I froze. When neither of my stepparents stirred in their room, I exhaled. I stepped out into the bitter cold night and latched the door closed behind me.
The moon glowed silver on the peaks of Hoarfrost Pass far to the north. The air was thin and clear, just about freezing my throat and lungs when I breathed. But I didn't care. In fact, I had not a care in the world at that moment.
I was free tonight.
I half-stumbled, half-slid down the slope to the edge of Running River. The ice was smooth and untouched, spreading all the way to Brick Bridge, beneath its arches and beyond. I smiled sadly, wishing I could follow the river to its end and escape my imprisoned life.
Swallowing my troubles, I sat in the powdery snow by the river's edge, threw off my boots, and began to lace on my skates.
Movement caught my eye and I looked up. Far out on the ice coasted the silhouette of a person. My heart jolted.
He came back for me.
I finished tying my skates and pushed off onto the ice.
Across the river, the silhouette turned to me, skating backward. I glided out in a half circle far to his side and he went the opposite way, connecting a circle.
We continued to skate, fly, skim, closer and closer. And without a word, we reached out and touched hands.
Our skates took us racing past the last of the cottages, beneath the bridge, through the mountain pass. We are still on our journey, always drifting further and further down the river's path. And now I know that he came to take me away from my nightmares and hopeless dreams, and into the beginning of a new life.

That's beautiful Livvie! Another one of your short stories? ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions! I felt like I was right there with her.
Yes =) Thank you!
ReplyDeleteOh awesome! That's my goal - to give it depth and feeling, to make the readers feel as if they are right there with the main character.
What's your favorite setting?
A seashore?
A dark autumn wood?
Winter landscape?
Riding on an overcast spring day?
Flying over mountains?
Etc etc...=)
I need more ideas!
Is that a trick question? ;)
ReplyDeleteI love the seashore,
I love dark autumn woods,
I love winter landscapes,
I love riding on an overcast spring day,
I love flying over mountains! (I know, not much help am I?)
But I have always loved the idea of galloping my horse through an open grassy field, the setting sun at my back, a cool summer breeze blowing my hair... And I also like a misty morning with a old castle. the morning sun just barely peeking over the distant hills, bathing the morning with a pale light... Sorry, I guess my imagination started to run away with me. :)
I hope I've helped!
Haha well, I'm glad you love those too! ;)
ReplyDeleteOh, that sounds wonderful...^_^
Wow...you are writing a story, right? I wish I could read something of yours 'cause you sound like an amazing writer in just that small paragraph!
Don't worry, you've helped! =D
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ReplyDeleteGlad to help! ;)
ReplyDeleteYep, I'm writing a story! You are too right?
I actually just thought up those paragraphs randomly. :P
Maybe I'll write a short story and comment here for you... :)
Here's something I've just written up. :)
ReplyDeleteI looked up towards the mountains. The sun was beginning to rise; the dark would soon fade into bright morning light. The sky was streaked with pink and yellow hues. Climbing up onto the old rail fence, I reached out my hand to pet the only wild horse that trusted and loved me. I had secretly trained her for the last six months. Her soft velvety muzzle sent shivers of anticipation up and down my spine. My life at the orphanage was over. Nobody there would even miss me. Even the other girls my age didn’t seem to care that I even existed. Everything that I owned was rolled up into the small blanket strapped over my shoulder. There wasn’t much there, just a change of clothes and the special ring my mother had given me before... I couldn’t bear to think about it anymore. I quickly pulled myself onto Majesty’s smooth golden back. I didn’t know where I was going, or what I was going to do. But I knew I had to leave. I gripped the wild mare’s mane with sweaty palms. There was no turning back. It was time to go.
Do you like it? :)
Oh that was so beautiful...I love it so much!
ReplyDeleteDoes your story have horses in it?
Yea I am, but I haven't written in a while...lost for ideas =/
No actually, I don't have any horses. :(
ReplyDeleteI have dragons instead. :P The setting is in 1500's Ireland. I thought dragons would be cool...
But most of my other stories have horses! (sadly, almost none of them are finished) Loss of ideas too... :)
Opps, almost forgot.
ReplyDeleteThank you!! :D